I Can Touch Them (They Won't Know) Part 2

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Jul 29, 2008


I'm pulled so quickly from the snow
And the world revolves as I go
And the stars explode in outerspace
And the cold lifeless empty caresses my face

And the colours explode in front of me
And the empty is filled with light
And I can touch them if I want to
I can touch them tonight

And the stars blow up in outerspace
And the swirl around again
And in my eyes i see God
I guess this is how the world began

And how is this all possible
I was just laying in the snow
Beside the road next to my house
And they will never know...

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  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Ha. this one made me smile, though i suppose it's not supposed to.

    And how is this all possible
    I was just laying in the snow
    Beside the road next to my house
    And they will never know...

    ^^ so the last line seems like a two way one. Because "they" is so vague..i thought of the family in the house when i first read it. but when i reread it..i thought of the stars. how they'll never know. but then again, i'm stupid and probably got that completely wrong. but it made shivers run up my spine ((which is why i smiled...i like shivers..)).

    good job..5/5

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