by Curing the Comon Cliche Jul 29, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Oh yes, I saw it with my eyes |
by StandStill
I actually don't like this as an ending. Like, it's creative perspective and what not....but i don't like th sudden switch. it kind of drags away from the atmosphere that you created. it's like whiplash, poetically. like, it's not bad, i like it as a poem. but...the last one could have ended it perfectly... |