Awesome! i like it. ur lucky, i dont even dream anymore.

a death dream, how fun.

5/5

O my gosh i love it!!!! that happened to me one time!! really similar except my mom almsot fainted lol. and she just was like im not even gonna try to understand you sweetie and she kissed my forehead and left. i miss her so much right now. but anyway its really good!!!
10/10

Great poem! simple and straight to the point good work

Sometimes death seems an easy option but the ones that don't choose that road come out stronger. 5/5, Em

I like it !! I've had a couple of dreams like that, i scared myself.
*comment on mine please(: