by Goth marionette Jul 29, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Darkness falls. |
by NoUr
Seems that ur an amazing poet..this poem was gr8 but thats not new 4 u..plz keep writng..ur awsome.. |
by Yeka
Love it truly I do this poem that you wrote is truly true. 5/5 |
by Yeka
Love it truly I do this poem that you wrote is truly true. 5/5 |
by BREEawNUHH
I really liked this. The rhymes were really good, and just the word choice in general. |
I enjoyed this poem alot yet it seems you were stretching yourself thin on trying to always rhyme sometime when you need the right words you cant always rhyme because to get the correct feel sometimes you need to free verse your poems a little but hey just my opinion |