Take A Bow (601) [[CONTEST]]

by NinjaGirl   Jul 29, 2008


Take A Bow

The crowd cheers,
You come up fast,
Smiling, waving,
And the moment lasts.

You walk and prance,
You swagger and sing,
A dirty lil dancer,
Not such a good thing.

He walks up behind you,
He smiles and waves,
The crowd roars,
He's the latest new craze.

You walk and you scowl,
With scorn upon your face,
You don't show your feelings,
You dance on, unfazed.

He starts a dance,
Of jazz and hip hop,
His sexy fast moves,
Force you to stop.

He smiles sweetly,
And you realize with shame,
That you have been beaten,
At your very own game.

You flash a smile,
And take a bow,
Because you're not wanted
Here right now.

©opyrighted by ~NinjaGirl~

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Uhm i can say with clear mind
    you are talented girl, this i find

    you rhym it good , the words are strong
    and you writen short lines, not long

    i love the last when he take the bow
    and when you say he should leave right now

    it is jsut good and a best for you i think
    and you shoudl added to your featured link

    at last you will get my vote,five you got
    and i still still think it is little to give you, not a lot
    :)