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by NinjaGirl Jul 29, 2008 category : Miscellaneous / Misc. poems
Take A BowThe crowd cheers, You come up fast, Smiling, waving, And the moment lasts. You walk and prance, You swagger and sing, A dirty lil dancer, Not such a good thing. He walks up behind you, He smiles and waves, The crowd roars, He's the latest new craze. You walk and you scowl, With scorn upon your face, You don't show your feelings, You dance on, unfazed. He starts a dance, Of jazz and hip hop, His sexy fast moves, Force you to stop. He smiles sweetly, And you realize with shame, That you have been beaten, At your very own game. You flash a smile, And take a bow, Because you're not wanted Here right now.©opyrighted by ~NinjaGirl~
by Mister 47
Uhm i can say with clear mind you are talented girl, this i find you rhym it good , the words are strong and you writen short lines, not long i love the last when he take the bow and when you say he should leave right now it is jsut good and a best for you i think and you shoudl added to your featured linkat last you will get my vote,five you got and i still still think it is little to give you, not a lot :)