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by Mister 47
Uhm i can say with clear mind you are talented girl, this i find you rhym it good , the words are strong and you writen short lines, not long i love the last when he take the bow and when you say he should leave right now it is jsut good and a best for you i think and you shoudl added to your featured linkat last you will get my vote,five you got and i still still think it is little to give you, not a lot :)