Comments : Take A Bow (601) [[CONTEST]]

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Uhm i can say with clear mind
    you are talented girl, this i find

    you rhym it good , the words are strong
    and you writen short lines, not long

    i love the last when he take the bow
    and when you say he should leave right now

    it is jsut good and a best for you i think
    and you shoudl added to your featured link

    at last you will get my vote,five you got
    and i still still think it is little to give you, not a lot
    :)