Freedom

by deeplydesturbed   Jul 29, 2008


Once again im here on earth
wishing i was dead
waiting for the time to come
when i can leave this bed

i cant move
my body just feels numb
in heartache in hurt in suffering
just let my time please come

i know you wont let me go
so im asking as a final wish
please just let me die already
and let me fade into the mist

when i die i will finally be alive
i will still see you
love you and
be here for you

through the happy and the sad
remeber me no matter what
though the joyous and the bad
and your heart will never stop

i need to say goodbye now
i hear hell callin me
you have to let go
i promise i will be set free

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  • 16 years ago

    by Invited

    Dieing just to be with their loved one- I have written a poem like that but I don't think it is as good as yours. Well Done! Keep it up. i absolutely love it. The poetic device, the structure,layout and interpunction is fantastic in this poem.

    Outstanding!
    5/5
    Chinwe

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