"Since the day I fell in love you with I never stop be happy" |
by H E Losey
There are many errors here that detract from what you are trying to say. It appears as though English is not your first language so it will be difficult for a while but you will get there. (this could be a direct translation from an Asiatic[?] language) |
by smiley
Oh am spanich but I don't write good |
When I was reading your poem it sounded like you were missing some words. IT didn't make scence in parts |