Comments : Regret

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Sulking while inhaling-
    Acid air through mists of hate,
    Falling through Hell's tunnels,
    Just a cursed reprobate.

    *I really loved this part. You use such strong words to describe your pain. I love the imagery and the style is one I know well. Very well written poem. Keep it up. Nik*