Comments : Mixed story

  • 16 years ago

    by Travis

    Wow, this is awesome
    loved the last line
    im listening to korn right now btw
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    Hahahahahaha
    I loved this, mostly because their names blow me away. I mean where do they come from. I'm just a different generation , I love the music but uhmm the names?
    you penned this to perfection ..haha