by H E Losey Jul 30, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
The wind blowing softly |
by Katie
I agree with the other commenter. It does not read very well. It is almost very visual for me, but I needed a little bit more. |
It just does not read right for me but it is all there if you know what I mean, yet it feels uncomplete? Like you I to am posting poems written years agotrying to edit them to get them right is very hard |