I like it....i think yours is better then mine, but then again we have 2 different styles in writing..but it was written well...good job!

Very well written I like it... just how it is written and the type of description you made :) 5/5

Have re-read once again. As with the 1st read it really was good: 5/5.

I think it turned out really great tiff, keep it up 5/5

Loved this. very interesting and thoughtful.

--aprils conspiracy

Thnk goooooooooooood it wasnt true..i was abt to cry..very touchful..keep writing