Ascension

by Paralyzed   Jul 30, 2008


Dance me to heaven
To gaze at the stars
Let's lie on the clouds
And talk of what's ours

This love and this passion
That took us away
And brought us to all
We thought wouldn't stay

Hearts that were aching
Souls that were torn
Now pieced together
And somehow reborn

The bad just can't matter
Above it we rise
All that once hurt me
Just fades in your eyes

One moment beside you
And life just feels right
Lets fly up to heaven
And lie there tonight

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  • 16 years ago

    by rebeccasarah

    Aww, I Loved this!

    "Hearts that were aching
    Souls that were torn
    Now pieced together
    And somehow reborn"

    I think this is my favorite stanza, although they are all great, this one seems to be saying, that even though you were once hurt, its all better now. You're still able to love again, and I find it motivating.

    This poem has extremely good flow, and is just overall, amazing :)
    Please, keep writing.
    5/5

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