Comments : YOU(short poem)

  • 16 years ago

    by rebeccasarah

    I like this. Its simple but very strong at the same time. It has good flow. Nicely written.
    Keep writing :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "I miss you
    hopeing you are okay"
    `Hoping not hopeing.

    This was overall very sweet, but to me it was more of a quote, and it was something that I swear I've read before.. but if not, then good job and keep it up. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    This poem is really short .. But really cute . The rimes are awesome , and yeah .. Hah 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    A very simple short poem that says volumes.It's a wonderful write with a sweet loving message.

  • 16 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Short but very good and you got your message across and rhymed very well good job

  • 16 years ago

    by XxShes Dieing InsidexX

    That's soo nice ! I LOVE IT ! =]

  • 15 years ago

    by Jad

    This was short but well done. The emotion you put in with a few words is really good. The flow and rhyme was good as well. This was overall a really great poem and you did a great job on it.

  • 15 years ago

    by Michaela T

    This is so sweet!!!!