Very nice, a sweet sentimental kind of poem, good metre and rhyme. If i could be so bold as to suggest trying to break your poems into stanzas in this case stanzas of four lines would have worked well and made the poem more readable.Just a sugestion mind, it's still a very nice poem. Maybe just a personal thing

Grant

This poem is great..i never knew someone could express their feelings that well

AWESOME 5/5

Aww that is such an adorable poem. It made me smile just reading it. You really expressed you self real well in this one. I loved it

Nice one. Good job. Ãœ