Comments : Everywhere, Yet Nowhere

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Thats a nice poem Charles good flow and rhyme nice theme too.Well done

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Unknown Soul

    Omg! such an amazing poem..
    I really know how this feels..

  • 16 years ago

    by Kianna

    WOW..thats a great poem..good job

    *5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    Loved the title, really made me want to read it

    **Running here, running there
    Really don't fit in anywhere**
    i guess many feel that way. just dont seem to have any right place to be.

    **Even when the family's home
    I still feel all alone**
    i liked the -family- home. normally... when one is with family.. they shouldn't feel alone.

    i like how you ended it. its true.. just be yourself

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow....i like....and i know how you feel......

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Lovely.. amazing poem.. very nice flow nd very good meaning with every word.. I liked it.. keep it up.. good job!!.. 5/5..

  • 16 years ago

    by maria

    Nice!

  • 16 years ago

    by Searching for Guidance

    You're right. this is just how i was feeling. i feel that often in the eyes of a poet, it is easier to write than to verbally explain things, so your family will often think you are secluding yourself, because you can not explain yourself the way you wish you could. i often do write things to my fam members (especially my mom) to share my true emotions. they really appreciate it.

  • 16 years ago

    by StarGirl

    I know what you meant now by the reference to my alone, but yours is way better. =) I loved it.