Thats a nice poem Charles good flow and rhyme nice theme too.Well done |
by Unknown Soul
Omg! such an amazing poem.. |
by Kianna
WOW..thats a great poem..good job |
by WaitAutumn
Loved the title, really made me want to read it |
by Stephanie
Wow....i like....and i know how you feel...... |
by Tiffany
Lovely.. amazing poem.. very nice flow nd very good meaning with every word.. I liked it.. keep it up.. good job!!.. 5/5.. |
by maria
Nice! |
You're right. this is just how i was feeling. i feel that often in the eyes of a poet, it is easier to write than to verbally explain things, so your family will often think you are secluding yourself, because you can not explain yourself the way you wish you could. i often do write things to my fam members (especially my mom) to share my true emotions. they really appreciate it. |
by StarGirl
I know what you meant now by the reference to my alone, but yours is way better. =) I loved it. |