Since you've been gone

by Saving Grace   Jul 30, 2008


It has been a few years now since youve been gone. But in this time a new dream has been re-born, a dream to pull through all the heartache and pain, the hope to maybe find my smile again.

Baby when I found out it shattered my smile && straight away I went into a painful denial. After that day, my life went downhill. I never thought you had the ability to kill.

I was so messed up, I didnt know what to do, and I didnt know how to face my life without you. You meant the world to me, which I honestly thought you could see

I know there had been some heartache and pain, but what you did made me feel that I was to blame. I know what you did was just so wrong, && baby I just wish youd realized that life goes on.

Its the end of this poem, and a few tears have fallen. But I just want to say, I hope I can forgive you one day. I miss you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww thats so sad, forgiveness is hard, especially when its someone you never thought would do something. but it does come, and you said it yourself, life does go on.

    great poem xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Shannon Pyscotic

    This was awesome. I loved it. the only thing i can say is the set up of it..
    But apart from that .. amazing write. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by rich sanchez

    I think u did a good job we all have our own way of expressing ourselves and putting things down and i feel u did jus that! nice rhyme scheme keep up the good work! 5/5

    p.s.- feel free to comment or critique any of my poems if u want to :-)

  • 16 years ago

    by TeXAmoXGummieX

    I really like this poem it would be better if you used a paragraph formation but I could understand it so that's fine

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