Regain hope...

by Shellaine shelli   Jul 30, 2008


You're so "secure"
with your life
your hope is visible
in the knife...

The blade you use
the souls you steal
the things you do just to feel...

The life you use
the choices you make,
your useless life...
their big mistake.

The razor you use
secludes your pain...
the blood you bleed
is so mundane...

The scars that show
let everyone know
the blood pours out...
you just
cant cope...
now its time for the rope...
Maybe then we'll regain hope...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    The scars that show
    let everyone know
    the blood pours out...
    you just
    cant cope...
    now its time for the rope...
    Maybe then we'll regain hope...

    This stanza is so strong...and the rhyme of the poem is good..
    The beginning of the poem made me think of the thoughts u think about and how u feel towards them..

    your hope is visible
    in the knife...

    I think those words really rock..Bcoz visualizing ur hope and life in the knife has a very deep meaning and show the pain and suffering..
    Ur poem is awesome..I did love it..
    Keep up the good work..

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