The scars that show
let everyone know
the blood pours out...
you just
cant cope...
now its time for the rope...
Maybe then we'll regain hope...

This stanza is so strong...and the rhyme of the poem is good..
The beginning of the poem made me think of the thoughts u think about and how u feel towards them..

your hope is visible
in the knife...

I think those words really rock..Bcoz visualizing ur hope and life in the knife has a very deep meaning and show the pain and suffering..
Ur poem is awesome..I did love it..
Keep up the good work..