Wow that was a very unique poem that flowed greatly and your two last words were great for a superb ending nice work 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Wow, I loveed this
It all went well together, Good work.

5/5

The short lines made it easier to read slowly. this poem was a very excellent read. each line finished the last and started a new. fit well together.

this would qualify for my "Brilliantly Depressing" category. if i could understand the intense emotions coming from this, ... anyway, thx for your comment.