Unsure Love

by LadyLk   Jul 30, 2008


You brought out my smiles again
The hurt came to an end
I'm no longer the clown of tears
Cuz with you I'm without fears
The shadows of darkness are gone
The real me will forever live on
The chains have let go of my wings
Released are this puppet's strings
I'm innocent, no longer on trial
But are these arrows of love or of vile
Poison and love symptom's are the same
So is this real love or just another game
I guess only time will help reveal
And if it's fake, this time i know i'll heal
And gain more independence on the way
Knowing my freedom from the last is here to stay
I wont be tortured anymore
Or have my soul drawn from its core

(basically its about leaving a bad relationship and going into a new one but this time being cautious)

Written by Lakeisha Roberts

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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    I know all about this, I've had a few bad relationships gone into a good one but it never lasted coz I was a little too cautious and it got on his nerves lol. 5/5, Em

  • 16 years ago

    by SHANA

    I LOVE THIS POEM ALOT TO ME I DONT THINK WRITING YOUR POEMS IT HAS TO RHYME AS LONG AS U CAN PUT INTO WORDS WAT U ARE FEELING I THINK IS GOOD.BUT THAT IS JUST MY OPINION

  • 16 years ago

    by haileyy

    This is a great poem..the flow is perfect. deffinetly shows the message you're trying to get out...

    i love it

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by LadyLk

    No i agree with you, i was a little rushed.. was hoping it wasnt noticeable though :S o well

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Yes i got the picture. It was a nice poem but to me the rhyme seemed a little forced and the transistion was a little off to me but hey thats just me.

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