Yes i got the picture. It was a nice poem but to me the rhyme seemed a little forced and the transistion was a little off to me but hey thats just me.

No i agree with you, i was a little rushed.. was hoping it wasnt noticeable though :S o well

This is a great poem..the flow is perfect. deffinetly shows the message you're trying to get out...

i love it

5/5

I LOVE THIS POEM ALOT TO ME I DONT THINK WRITING YOUR POEMS IT HAS TO RHYME AS LONG AS U CAN PUT INTO WORDS WAT U ARE FEELING I THINK IS GOOD.BUT THAT IS JUST MY OPINION

I know all about this, I've had a few bad relationships gone into a good one but it never lasted coz I was a little too cautious and it got on his nerves lol. 5/5, Em