Comments : Ever Loving Lie

  • 16 years ago

    by Austin

    Clever title. I liked how it worked into the last few lines. Well, not much to say accept that relationship must have sucked haha. Sorry. The poem is very clear on your thoughts though. That's always key when writing about personal experiences.

  • 16 years ago

    by smiley

    I love ur poem I give it 5 ok

  • 16 years ago

    by smiley

    I love ur poem I give it 5 ok