Forbidden Hope

by hannah johnson   Jul 30, 2008


Why do these tears fall so easily
why does this heart bruise so fast
why does this pain come so freely
why do i always remember the past?

when my eyes fill with tears
and i cant hold them back
they began to smear
as my mascara runs black

a needle is all it takes
to puncture my heart
not even a break
has to tear my apart

the weight of my heart
the weight of my soul
its tears me apart
and i lose all control

my past was not bad
i have a good life
so why am i sad
and filled with strife

these questions i know
but these answers are hidden
where can i go
all hope seems forbidden.

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  • 16 years ago

    by hannah johnson

    Aw thanks!
    yeah i think that would make better sense.. the only reason i didnt really think of that was because like my life compared to a lot of people.. its a good life but idk i guess it would be better if i did that... cause it makes more since to say i had...

    but yeah thanks soooooooo much for your suggestions :)
    i love it love it love it when people help me out with my poems!
    so thank you again! :))

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Ok first great poem i liek ti specialy the rhyming
    and the frist stanza was awsome

    jsut these few remarqs

    my past was not bad
    i have a good life

    you shoudkl say :i had a good life :)

    other then that iti si a very good poem

    i love it
    great work

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