Comments : Southern Comfort

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Deana
    What a wonderful peaceful poem.

    Mountain memories,childhood play
    Morning glories fragrant show
    Beautiful scenes deep inside
    Visions through which we grow

    The imagery in this piece is awesome...I can imagine being right there in my mind.

    Feel the freedom as seagulls soar
    Close your eyes release the pain
    Walk barefoot on mossy floor
    A rainbow follows rain

    I can almost smell the air after a rain and feel the cool moss on my feet.

    Great job!
    Love Cindy