Comments : Hush-a-by ((Don't you Cry))

  • 16 years ago

    by BornAgainWriter

    THE WHOLE THING?!?!!? OMG!?!?!?!?!!?!? SHOULD BE RATED INDIVIDUALLY...and...yeah. gabby, this is.. whoa...just whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whao whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whao whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whao whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whao whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whao whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whao whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whao whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whao whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whao whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa whao whoa

    mmhms. it really was...like WHO-AAAA!

    [...walks away, from self shame]

    [[[[[YAY! I GOT IT RIIGHT THIS TIME]

  • 16 years ago

    by SheFlowsThroughMyVeinsLikePosion

    I really like this piece.
    I love the way that the words flow and each stanza flows.
    Keep up the good work.

    xoxo