by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden Jul 31, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Although his motives were malign |
What a interesting write. The description at the end was helpful and helped the reader understand the poem more. It's kind of sad when someone controls the relationship more than the other person. It definatly does happen though in life sometimes. Great piece here though. I loved how you put the word bank at the bottom, that seems to be very helpful at times. Great job, keep writing to impress me. :] 5/5 |