Laughing out loud.

by uppercase   Jul 31, 2008


She said; boy I know you have a heart the size of the ocean, girls aren't just ready for a guy your kind quite yet.
I'm sorry to inform you you're going to have to keep trying, keep getting off your knees and try try again.
I may see the door locked upon the love you bear, but I don't have the key to open your chest.
He quietly stares at his shoes and gives his remark; girl I don't know what you're saying and or implying.
I know it's good, but some of it just doesn't feel right, the love I bear seems to burden me beneath my chest.
I might have swallowed the key on accident, I'm not certain any girl wants to go through me to get to that quite yet.
My kind feels extinct and I don't know if there are any others like me anymore, I'm alone; left in a struggling world.
She softly speaks into his ear; you're not extinct my friend, you are very real to me in this world and I'm not certain why you don't feel the same.
Things are going to be a little rough over the years; but don't give hope up on me. don't ever change the man God has made you today.
I know He has you here for a reason, and it isn't to be the last of your kind; people can really learn from you.
As soft words hits his chest like bullets; he trembles into the air; people my age can be so cruel, so unknowing, the point of my existence has been lost in my train of thought.
I have been hit in low spots and I still keep my head up; is this all that God put me on this world to do? To see my endurance? I have endured the pain I never want to see again. I am about past my limit.
The girl gently grabs his hand and inquires; boy, I know you aren't having the time of your life, just promise me one thing and thats not to give up; I'll keep asking you.
I may not be able to carry you like you can carry others, but I know boy that your limit goes far beyond your minds comprehension.
Keep in focus the love and time God has given you and don't worry about the finish line, worry about the space between.
He lifts his head up and says. It seems to be a gradual thing as day becomes into night; I may be uncertain of the things I contain and what I'm capable of.
I guess that's the things that don't matter much right now, I have a plate of things I need to solve already I don't need a bigger hunk of it.
She looks at him; That's the guy I know, don't ever lose him because someone will appreciate it, someone will be ready for a man like you in their life.

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  • 16 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    You're right, I did like this one. It has a nice story line. Pretty sad though.. makes me feel sorta lonely in a way. Very good job though.

    Overall Rating: 5.5/6