by rumba Jul 31, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I picked a star in the sky and every night I check on it to see if it's alright. It's not that big and it's not that bright but it gets me through another night. Another night of your rejection not wanting me but see that star is still on my side. Up so high where no one can reach. Just the place I want to be. |
I really liked the last two sentenances they had me thinking a little. A short but sweet write. You might wanna change your format a little because it may make it easier to read. just a suggestion^^. Nice write over all maybe u can read one of mine. |