Comments : My angel of sorrow

  • 16 years ago

    by pozinthenoise

    I love this composition! Wow, the formation of the words plus the feelings and thoughts were combined in an outstanding manner. I love the way you created an angel who would not guide but he, who would be guided... Hope he'll find his way to you! Good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Abu3li

    I shall teach him to fly again,
    I shall be the one he lives for,
    I shall be his angel,
    Even if it means letting him go..

    ya. flying again.

    nice poem and nicely written

    good luck

  • 15 years ago

    by Walter F Alvarado

    Excellent work, usually I write poems about love but I never thought of it this way..very good use of words goes with the title.