I love this so much. I know I was loved this way and I know the feeling. You wrote of it perfectly and wonderfully. I like poems with heart you have much heart.
Wonderful poem

Our children are the result of the union between our bodies our minds and our souls
-very pretty
your love is deep and very real, it shows :]

Grant,

What a beautiful verse. Your dedication is so very clear within these words.

For you to sacrifice your life just to make me whole
Is something I could never repay no matter how I try

^^^^ This is the only thing I do not agree with because you did the same for her. Think about these words and you will know I am right;)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Wow, this is amazing :) I bet your wife loved this :) It really shows how much you apriciate her :)

Awww I love it truly explain the real emotions and every word that you us good to the flou love it (^_^)