by julie Jun 3, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
My blood runs black, my hands are stained red, |
Beautifull |
by Brian King
very good i liked every part except for |
by Lisa
Good poem.. I especially liked the french part. taking it in school.. beautiful language. Keep up the good work ;) |
by N J Thornton
Great poem. I love the use of words, very original. A deep dark write with lost of emotion and a nice rhyme flow. The only part i didn't get was the bit that looked like it was in french...i failed french at school. But despite that i thought what i understood was very good. |
by SarZz
Gud effort! |