Comments : Chat Room Love

  • 16 years ago

    by music4pumpkins

    Nice poem, someone who actually uses big words and descriptive writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Amazing, these four lines stand out from all the rest:

    you and your abbreviated descriptions
    that were hard to decipher like pharmaceutical prescriptions
    written by foreign physicians
    made possible by mathematical encryptions
    ^
    I love your word choice, the way each line flows with ease to the next, each end of line rhyme suited the next and was in keeping with the poems theme.

    Well done here.

    Michael