That was rather a ver very sad piece. I do believe what makes a poem good is when you write it straight from the heart just like this one..Its not that structure that really attracts the readers although it might be a big difference when it is structured well but the best poems as for me will be the ones with genuine feelings in it..The repetition of the things you have done together were so perfect that intensify how badly you were missing her.. The part where you were reminiscing or trying to remember her touched my heart deeply..I like da title as well..nuthin extraordinary actually but it suit well with the whole poem..

I wish you well and always remember that things happen for a reason..

Goodluck and dont forget to smile..xDD
Take care...