Tears

by Savannah Kate   Jul 31, 2008


Nights may seem longer,
But the stars brighter.
More brilliant than ever.
As if shining just for our pleasure
Minutes feel like hours,
And hours feel like years.
Thats why sweetheart,
I miss you with my tears.
As long as your mine,though
Ill be fine.
Those tears that you see,
Streaming down my face,
They may seem sad,
But sometimes,
Youve got to look
Deeper than my expressions
Deeper into my heart
And you may find
That there is a hint of happiness in them
Because I have you.
For longing,
Wanting,
Striving,
Living,
Pacing,
Waiting,
Loving,
Is hidden in tears of sadness.
And joy.
Even though i know,
That you will stay true,
I cry tears,
Just for you.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    Awww thank you so much!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    A perfect ending to a much beautiful poem. I love how you dare to write it in free verse..a lot of poets, even the older ones do not dare to take that risk!
    You did it with grace and verve, bravo!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Mishka

    Aww this really reminds me of my poem, "A tear holds..." :) actually.. it has the same exact.... meaning basically.

    great job i loved this. :)

    very fun to read. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    I loved at the end how you just described emotions one worded ones that was nice to read
    very good job! : ) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lil Ash

    Well done and congrats on coming 2nd on the contest you get 10 ratings and 10 comments ^-^ So this is your first

    WELL DONE AMZING POEM :D

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