Very pretty. Kinda sad, but I like it. Goooood job Savannah!

Well done and congrats on coming 2nd on the contest you get 10 ratings and 10 comments ^-^ So this is your first

WELL DONE AMZING POEM :D

I loved at the end how you just described emotions one worded ones that was nice to read
very good job! : ) 5/5

Aww this really reminds me of my poem, "A tear holds..." :) actually.. it has the same exact.... meaning basically.

great job i loved this. :)

very fun to read. 5/5

A perfect ending to a much beautiful poem. I love how you dare to write it in free verse..a lot of poets, even the older ones do not dare to take that risk!
You did it with grace and verve, bravo!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Awww thank you so much!