Comments : Asdfghjkl

  • 16 years ago

    by xxDaniellexx

    OMG.... that gave me goosebumps... Really sad but a great poem... not the title though...lol I came to yours by accident because there's no actual title....

    Good job though...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NoUr

    Tragedy..if parents dun give a damn to their children y did they bring them ?!
    but even if the parents didnt win..niether did she/he..

  • 16 years ago

    by rich sanchez

    Very deep im sorry to hear tha :-( but good job flowed very nicely! :-)