A beautiful yet very sad poem, the flow was very good and filled with emotion.
My fav lines were 'I could tell in your eyes,
Your feelings for me were fading.' I could imagine how difficult that would be, to see everything falling apart infront of you.
Great work =]

Ok, well i commented on the wrong poem, so shh! dont tell =P

Anywayss,
This has sooo much emotiion too it.
I adore it. keep it up!!

PS you are very talented at rhyming =P
Dollface.

I thought the flow was good and the message was very clear the only thing I thought was it was a assembly of like minded statement of how this guy was an ass. It never really made me feel for the author or why should I there was something missing but I couldn't put my finger on it Plot121