Hey, nice job! I really appriciate your style of writing, this is a very unique poem, definately! great job! 5/5

Wow hun, the words are awesome...
I turned a bend and came upon a river singing its way down to the sea
I wonder if the river will talk to me again as it dances underneath the bridge on its way to the sea?
ohhh this is sooo nice... you are gooood Mr Smith ;)