Yeah... This is a good one! 8)

'You coming into my life had to be gods plan'
... I think it's YouR here.. :)
'Knew it'd always be somthing i didnt understand'
.... SomEthing is spelled wrong..

I like it..!!

5/5 8).

I loved it, what a sweet poem. I'd love to have an amazing friend like you. Best wishes if you give it to her :)

Sole x

Very cute! i liked the second and the last stanza ^_^ 5/5

~tia

"You made my heart buzz just like a bee"
`Hmm. Cute! This was a nice simile.

-Capitolize your i's.. I saw a few that weren't.
`Flow was kinda ehh forced in a way, but umm, the poem was pretty sweet overall. Nice work. Keep writing. 4/5.

Ii REALLy LyKEd iT! =D
iT WAS WELL WRiTTEN && iT MAdE ME SMiLE TEW
ii CAN REALLy RELATE TEW iT CUz dATz LyK dA WAy MA BOyFRiENd FELT B4 WE GOT TEWGETHER
KEEP UP dA GREAT WORK 5/5

Lovely poem, i loved rading it. Great job. Keep it up Shanik

I remember being like this. I couldnt get over her for a year and i realized if i truly loved her i would have the power to let go. Nice poem filled with beautiful emotions.

Great ryme!

it's harder for meto ryme every line like that,

nice job!

5/5 great beginning and ending, the poem kept the reader interested throughout the whole time.

Wow this is very good..I love the way you made it rhyme!
I cn sorts relate to this bc im waiting for someone too!

A def 5/5
~Brittany~

Wow, justin you have improved.
though ive always thought you were good.

that was an amazing poem.
it reminded me of someone actually [:
great work, keep it up!

-katelyn [:

So cute

Beautifully rhymed!!

I love your poems there so beatiful(:
100/100

X

Wow love it very powerful and full of emotions i just like it bravo really this part is amazing(Even if that is the way you decide to go
I'll always be here just like the wind that blows
And if our love was our fate
I just want you to know I'll Wait) keep it up :)