Almost

This is cool except some grammar mistakes
and something like
"Dreamt my princess this night"
Dreamt should be Dreamed
and you should add 'of' between Dreamed and my
would make more sense like that

well other than that u did good job
the flow is good and the word choice is fitting gr8
but too many grammar mistakes to give u 5/5
so i think 4/5 would be fair

I found this one really cute and warm, I love the ending the most. I also agree with above, it should be in past tense because you almost did that but you didn't. I almost wrote that it was written perfectly but when I thought about it, it really should be in past tense. Other than that, I love this piece, I find it cute.

Some grammar error's, but hey I have a lot of typo's in my when I first post them. lol

I like the flow of this poem, and I envy how you brought your raw emotion of love out in this piece.
I myself have a hard time writing love poems, so I can't really help with any advice on improving.
Sorry, I do love it though. Very beautiful.

Jenn

Great concept here, again. But change the grammatical errors. Other than that, this is a lovely write. I like the capitalization of i love you in the end, shows you really mean it.

-X

I liked the rhythm of this poem. Flowed very well. Another great piece.