"I almost learn to write |
by Lofallenve
I liked the rhythm of this poem. Flowed very well. Another great piece. |
by Xanthe
Great concept here, again. But change the grammatical errors. Other than that, this is a lovely write. I like the capitalization of i love you in the end, shows you really mean it. |
by Jenn
Some grammar error's, but hey I have a lot of typo's in my when I first post them. lol |
by L
I found this one really cute and warm, I love the ending the most. I also agree with above, it should be in past tense because you almost did that but you didn't. I almost wrote that it was written perfectly but when I thought about it, it really should be in past tense. Other than that, I love this piece, I find it cute. |
by Max
This is cool except some grammar mistakes |