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by Ed or Ian Henderson
Well I think this sums up children nicely! If I may be Mr Picky for a moment though? "As they go outside to run, about and play." The punctuation left me stumbling a little. I re-read it with the comma moved: "As they go outside, to run about and play." I also think you could capture their inherent humour by having: "As they go outside, to run, laugh, and play." Just my two pen'eth! It's still a lovely poem.