Wow. This is a very excellent poem. It shows what great of a person you really are. I loved how this poem was kind of a way of saying Thank You to your parents and how they have helped you in life and everything and how appreciative you are of them. This was a great write. 5/5.

I have a debt that can't be paid
No matter how I try
It came with me so long ago
I'll keep it till I die

I love it love it love it. That's awesome.

For all their love and kindness
For every worry and each tear
Somehow I must repay them
But too little time is left I fear

That's really good. It's understandable and heart breaking.

The last stanza was just cute. :) This is a sweet poem I really loved how you told the story from birth and their suffering to make you who you are all the way to just finally thanking them. It was a great way to end the poem.

Five out of five.