Comments : True Love

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    How many times can one man love?
    As many times as stars above.

    Right from the first two lines I thought this piece would be great. I mean, everyone uses stars above and love because it works, but you not only made it work but you made it a little different. Most people say something cliche liiiike....What I would give to you my love would be all the stars above. Or something like that. But you made it unique. :D

    With each new girl its love "4 ever"
    True love it seems but lasting, never.

    I loved what I pictured when I read this. I pictured something on the front of a note book carved in deeply with blue pen 4 ever and you're right, everyone says it and it never happens.

    This was a very...beautiful poem. Beautiful is the only word I can think of right now to describe it.

    Flawless.

    Five out of five as usual.