Comments : Do i Deserve this life?

  • 16 years ago

    by XxxYour broken angelxxX

    I really like this poem,nice job

  • 16 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Hi! Ur poem's really nice؛‎ ‎I like it.. Well, I do still feel like tellin u that life's , as u know, "ups and downs" and "the darkest hours are those that come just before the dawn". Only patient people who can live most of their lives happily.. Good luck.:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Hi! Ur poem's really nice؛‎ ‎I like it.. Well, I do still feel like tellin u that life's , as u know, "ups and downs" and "the darkest hours are those that come just before the dawn". Only patient people who can live most of their lives happily.. Good luck.:)

  • 16 years ago

    by SADADDY

    The feeling of pain and helplessness is felt in the words you have expressed in your write. May you oneday find the peace and joy that you are seeking deep within your heart.

    Sadaddy