Great poem. you guys work well together. Kepp it up. Shanik

This was a wonderful collab. I like how you both wrote about writer's block in hopes to break your writer's block and I think you did a amazing job. Things to remember: captiolize i's and remember to put apostrophes in words that need them. I noticed quite a few that didn't have them. I love how DJ's last stanza was like he was rapping and handing the microphone over to you to rap.. that was cool. I know who DJ is lol, and I know he loves rapping. The first three stanzas were GREAT! I loved it. It definatly described what goes on when someone has writer's block. Perfect start.

Overall, awesome write. This poem had a rhyme scheme and it flowed wonderfully. I loved the idea of writing about writer's block. Both of you did a beautiful job! 5/5