Title - It's reallllly long, maybe you could shorten it up? And, I should be I'm, by the way. Maybe you didn't have room for it. Shorten the title. I think if I read the poem I'm going to get the point anyways.

"Trace rings around my scrawny fingers, and kiss them with our future,"
`Kiss them with our future - that was beautiful and a unique way to write it.

Overall, yes... I must say this poem was alittle confusing. Something about loving someone and wanting to marry them or something? Like you thought it wasn't a good thing but then it didn't sound so bad. Then something switched to like waking up to them every morning and yadeyada. Then you switched to his point of view and it was him waking up and asking you if he snore during the night.. Lol. This write definatly made you think though. It was beautiful though for the most part. All I would say for this one is make your title shorter.. it doesn't have to be that long. Although, you do come up with some pretty unique titles.. I think you could shorten it.. because basically all your titles are sentences and I don't think they have to be that long. Other than that, interesting write. You definatly had to infer in this one. I love how you switched points of view here from the girl to the guy, but it did get a bit confusing! Good job -howeverr.<33 5/5