by CourtneyyContageous Aug 1, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I'm standing strong, I'm breaking down, |
This poem is very good i loved it |
Again, what a wonderful write. You both do collabs together very well. The more I read this poem the deeper and darker to me it got. You did a wonderful job portraying that mood in this poem. Very sad. Great job.. 5/5 |
by Zara Baines
Really nicely written and very clever, ireally enjoyed it |
by Austin
I was very surprised. This was very well written. An excellent poem. I loved the feel of it while I was reading. If gave a very dramatic and sad feeling. Almost like someone was sacrificing their self. I don't know the exact details of the collaboration, but if I were you I would do it again. 5/5 |
by Mister 47
Well i can feel the sadness and the feeling of beeing in that postion when you ahev to fake your smiles for others, !! |