Standing Strong; Breaking Down. [collab.]

by CourtneyyContageous   Aug 1, 2008


I'm standing strong, I'm breaking down,
This rusted bullet to my head.
I'm broken and I'm fading now,
Your love, will leave me dead.

I'm strong on the surface,
Though not all the way through.
This bullet piercing my skin,
All because of you.

Your only advice to me;
Stand strong, but I'm only breaking down.
Without your loving touch to cure me,
My heart can barely make a sound.

I'm drowning in all this darkness,
Please don't let me die.
I may be broken but I'm standing strong,
You'll never see me cry.

So I'll hold my head up high,
As my walls come crashing down.
I'll stand here waiting,crumbling inside.
Being strong, the only way I know how.

Everybody's fooled by this fake smile,
But deep inside I cry.
I'll stand stronger then ever,
No tears will escape from these eyes.

So I'll hold my head up high,
As my walls come crashing down.
I'll stand here waiting,crumbling inside.
Being strong, the only way I know how.

[Collab. with HvN. He's a pretty good writer if i do say so myself.<3]

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  • 16 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    This poem is very good i loved it
    well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Again, what a wonderful write. You both do collabs together very well. The more I read this poem the deeper and darker to me it got. You did a wonderful job portraying that mood in this poem. Very sad. Great job.. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Zara Baines

    Really nicely written and very clever, ireally enjoyed it

    check out mine if you get a chance

  • 16 years ago

    by Austin

    I was very surprised. This was very well written. An excellent poem. I loved the feel of it while I was reading. If gave a very dramatic and sad feeling. Almost like someone was sacrificing their self. I don't know the exact details of the collaboration, but if I were you I would do it again. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Well i can feel the sadness and the feeling of beeing in that postion when you ahev to fake your smiles for others, !!

    i think she is a very good poem nicely writen
    but i think it need more rhyming in it ,

    great job