Mmm
good flow of thinking !!!

you are good at it i think

I thank you, first, for reading my work:) It was very nice of what you said.

I really liked the title of this poem, and i reallllly love this format. I see what you are saying and it makes sense....
it is emotional, regretful, it is life.

great one, hayley.
re you kay's friend?

5/5